The holiday season is upon us with Christmas right around the corner. Has everyone been good this year? Have I been good, I hear you asking. Well, I have a 50-50 chance of making the naughty list. Think positive, I say, that means, I have a 50% chance of making the nice list.
During the holiday's, I plan on spending time with family and slipping in some editing. I have two novels in editing right now and look forward to publishing them soon. I will reach my first goal of six books published.
Then I can start a new story and let it take me to new places.
Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night.
Robz Ajatus, which means Rob's thoughts is my blog about my writing. I will share my experiences as I continue to write. The journey, the realizations, and the insights, I discover along the way
Tuesday, 18 December 2012
Saturday, 1 December 2012
National Novel Writing Month
I accepted the challenge and although it was not easy, found a way to make it through.
The novel I wrote in 30 days is called, Play with Stones, a fantasy involving a young boy that experiences the adventure of his life. The novel is now in editing for release soon.
The novel I wrote in 30 days is called, Play with Stones, a fantasy involving a young boy that experiences the adventure of his life. The novel is now in editing for release soon.
Tuesday, 23 October 2012
The Fifth
My fifth book has been written and is in first edit. I wrote a different genre which was challenging. Once it's published, I will soon find out if I was successful. I have also noticed that it is tough to work full time and write full time. It has definitely affected my daily word count.
Anyway, my newest novel will be available at the end of October, 2012.
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Anyway, my newest novel will be available at the end of October, 2012.
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Monday, 20 August 2012
Still Writing
It's about time I dropped in a few words. Two major things have happened in my world. The first was getting the job thing while secondly, I continue to write.
My next novel is in the works and about 80% complete. It is a dark fantasy following a teenage that inadvertently releases a curse that he cannot escape from. The title has not been confirmed thus far but will be coming soon.
Take care and keep smiling.
Sunday, 8 July 2012
Zytainium - Dimensions
Zytainium - Dimensions
The third installment of the Zytainium series has been completed and released. It is available on Smashwords and Amazon to start. The book will be available at Sony, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, Apple, Diesel, Page Foundry, and Bake-Taylor soon. It follows Tarin and Chase as they put the final pieces of the puzzle regarding the mysterious advanced race together. They rush against time to stop what they did not start. Read the exciting conclusion and witness how a galaxy is saved.
Sunday, 17 June 2012
Where Did I Go?
Where did he go?
Stop the presses, wait, I don't have a press. The quick answer is work and writing known as W&W has left little time to blog. I know what you're saying, terrible. I do believe that we can get past it though, just hang in there. I finished my editing of the third installment of the Zytainium series called Zytainium - Dimensions. The work is now in the hands of my Senior Editor, affectionately known as Whittle Bren for release soon. I'm working on a new novel that is has a touch of scariness to it by following the events of a 16-year old that stumbles across something unexpected.. The name has not been finalized yet. That is all to report at this time and Happy Father's Day to all.
Keep smiling.
Monday, 28 May 2012
Zytainium - Next
Hot off the presses:
Please enjoy and keep smiling.
Zytainium - Next
The second book of the Zytainium series has been released.
It is now available on Smashwords and Amazon for readers to look at. It will be
soon be available at other retailers soon such as Apple, Nook, Sony, Kobo,
Stanza, and Diesel.
Saturday, 19 May 2012
Almost Ready for the Presses
Almost Ready for the Presses
Have you ever experienced the situation where you’re in a
room casually talking with someone? The conversation is sparse with a few
choice words here and there. You turn to do something and say a couple more
things before turning back. You are shocked to discover that you are by
yourself and wonder how long you have been speaking to no one. You also feel
like a dope for not noticing.
Sometimes when I blog here I wonder if anyone is listening
or I’m just speaking in an empty cave hearing only my echo.
It is understandable that so much information out there few
blogs are actually read compared with the total number out there. Still I
wonder what people want to read these days, you know what is considered
interesting. So, drop me a comment if you are lucky enough to come across any
of my ramblings and let me know.
Thursday, 19 April 2012
The Marketing of Marketing
The Marketing of Marketing
For anyone trying
establish themselves as a writer and if you hang in there long enough, you soon
find the marketing of your works a daunting task. The marketing of your works
has been subdivided into many parts. Each of these parts has in-depth ways of
accomplishing the differing aspects of that particular part. I will not list
them here as anyone can perform an online search and find the suggestions
available.
It has created an industry within itself where you can spend a lot
for the latest sure-fire methods that will work for you as long as you follow
the steps. I would be curious to see an analysis done on those that have
purchased the marketing products just to see how many actually succeeded. I
hear what you’re thinking; we already know the answer, probably few.
Most writers are
looking for ideas that work for them. What may work for you might not work for
me. We are after all, different in many ways. General methods seem to work
generally. If that gives you the big recognition, the big break, then
fantastic.
I find it
interesting to read about an author who had done little marketing and somehow
receives attention. Their sales begin to take off. Now how did they do it is
the question I have on my mind.
Did they write on a topic that is of interest at the time?
Was it the style of their writing?
Was their cover eye catching?
Or do you chalk it up to being in the right place at the
right time. No easy answer to that question.
Here is my
questions regarding being a successful writer.
1. How many words in total does one have to write in order
to become a good writer?
2. How many books does one write before being noticed?
Monday, 2 April 2012
Breaking News - I’m Finished
Breaking News - I’m Finished
Believe it not I finished writing
novels two and three of my Zytainium series at once. The reason for doing this
was simply for the series consistency. I could have went in a few different
directions with the story and wanted to ensure it was uniform. Now it took
longer of course to write but I kept going. A couple of times I became bogged
down in how the story should evolve. The idea I had just didn’t work for me, so
I slept on it, and surprisingly I dreamt how to proceed seamlessly into the
section of the story. Anyway, now that the drafts are done its onto the editing
phase. This will take some time do complete. Regardless it is started.
I have spent a lot of time with the
characters of the Zytainium series as they have developed. It is time to give
them a break. I want to finish the editing and start my next new story with new
characters. For those of you one day who find the Zytainium series please enjoy
as I put my heart into it. I would love to hear feedback on what readers think
of it.
Sunday, 1 April 2012
Breaking News - The End is Near
Breaking News - The End is Near.
Okay I understand your caution
especially on April 1st and everyone knows someone who says the end is at hand.
Please be warned, don’t run out and spend all your money on billboards like the
followers of Harold Camping. If you must advertise, try the local paper in
their classified section and choose a small ad. Its relatively cheap and if
things don’t work out the way you envision or what you were told to envision,
then at least you will have some money left to pay the rent or mortgage. Plus
you just might have a little left over for a new ad next time you believe
things are near the end.
Now according the Mayan calendar
things are suppose to end on December 21, 2012, this year on a Friday no less.
You can’t even enjoy the weekend and forget about Christmas. Makes you wonder
what shopping will be like later this year. No sense in purchasing gifts since
opening them might be an issue. By they way, the Hopis people believe the same
thing as well. However, both groups believe we are approaching the end of a
World Age. They do not say it’s the end of the world but the transition of one
world age into another. Their message suggests the issue is how we handle the
coming transition. Will we be resistant or acceptant of the changes? From what
I have seen of our cultures around the world even with all the advancements in
understanding, is we still resist change. We do accept change when the pain of
resisting it becomes too much to handle.
The thought I will leave you with
is simply, is it the end, or is the end just the beginning.
Wednesday, 21 March 2012
Zytainium - second book of the series
Below is an excerpt from the second book in the Zytainium series. I decided to write books two and three in one shot. The third book of the series is almost complete first written draft.
Please enjoy.
“When does this operation start?”
Edan asked.
“Right now. Make two sites
disappear that you think will fit our needs. Ensure you to cover our tracks on
what we are doing. On top of that, someone tonight is going to have to go there
and secure them. Now there is a dinner with the new council, Felan, all the
leadership in which I have already excused you.”
“You definitely don’t miss around,”
Edan said.
“There is too much riding on this
to leave things to chance.” I turned to the knock on the door. It was Chase,
good and went over to let him in.
“Greetings all,” Chase said.
“Training is going well. We will be ready.” He looked at both of us know
something was up by our faces. “What did I miss?”
“I just got Edan to agree to an
unauthorized, highly secretive mission.”
“What are we going to be doing
now?” Chase asked.
“Edan, begin operation site
disappearing. I’ll fill in Chase.” Edan nodded and headed for his lab
workstation with the comm device attached with all its components, pulling up
the cache locations.
“Chase, I have a bad feeling about
what is going to happen in the near future.”
“We are going to disappear again,
right,” he said. I heard Edan chuckling to himself.
“Yes and a bit more. We are going
to set up secret bases of operations for just the three of us as I only trust
those in this room.”
“I am not surprised Tarin,” Chase
said. “I could feel the vibes coming from you. Even Ora mentioned something
about having us sit on the sidelines. I figured that would go over well. I take
it she told you.”
“Yes she did. I can’t let the
naivety of our people get in the way.”
Chase laughed, “just like the old
days when we were on the lam. Alright, what do you want me to do?”
“Tarin, you were right, Chase had no issue with this undercover
operation,” Edan said from his lab station. Monday, 12 March 2012
Toward the End
Today’s from the armchair topic is toward the end. What does
that mean? It means I’m in the finally stages of getting to the end of the
third book of a sci-fi series. For me, what makes this interesting is after
finishing the second book, I continued on writing the third. The flow was there
and I wanted ensure that how I described events and things were consistent
throughout the last two books. The challenge I find is in describing what the
characters are going through that makes sense. I go into areas that I hoping
not to lose readers which why the finale is becoming more difficult to compose
taking extra time. Going through this I had to wonder what other writers do to
overcome this hurdle. Whether they take a break and do something else or just
keep writing. I find that I’m even dreaming how to overcome or build the
bridges between different points where the story is going. On a side note, the
dreaming I have found interesting, as some of my conundrums have been satisfied
and then I find myself dreaming of other possible stories in other genres. For
example, last night I dreamt the plot for a mystery novel that I am considering
writing.
Anyway, I have blogged less as every possible moment is used
to complete the third installation of the series. Then the editing portion can
start which I know will take some time as my editor, Bren, has to go through
225,000 words. So, I can see the end but I know its still a ways off. I am also
excited about which one of the next four novels to start and to get going on
those projects.
Keep smiling.
Thursday, 8 March 2012
What Is a Bucket List and Why Do I Need One?
What Is a Bucket List and Why Do I Need One?
Today I have a
guest blogger, Melanie, a contributor on
the Mesothelioma Cancer Alliance blog who has graced me with the concept of
the Bucket List. I like what she has to say on the topic.
Thank you Melanie.
Did
you see the movie “The Bucket List?” It is a wonderful movie about two
men who are faced with life threatening health situations. They each
create a list of things they want to accomplish in their life even in the face
of terrible circumstances. For many people who are faced with health
issues, such as chronic pain, multiple sclerosis, mesothelioma and others, a
challenging prognosis can be the inspiration
to take their life into their own hands and make their life goals a reality.
Make Your Own Bucket List
Regardless of what challenges you face, you can create your own bucket list of things you want to accomplish in your life. A bucket list does not need to be some elaborate list of things that are impossible to ever accomplish. It can be made up of both large and small things that you want to see happen in your life.
Start with small things. Make up a list of small everyday things that you want to accomplish. If one of your challenges is conquering simple daily activities, then include those things on your first small list. For example, you can make it a goal to walk around the block without stopping or maybe you want to be able to go grocery shopping without assistance. Include activities that you really want to be able to do, they may be a little challenging but you can realistically accomplish. This way, when you cross them off your list, you will feel a sense of satisfaction and achievement when you accomplish those goals.
Make a list of medium things that you want to accomplish. This bucket list could include things that you might not want to do every day or even with regularity, but are milestone activities. For example, maybe you want to go see a local tourist attraction that you have never been to, even though it is local to you. Include some activities that you can accomplish entirely independently on your own and some things that you can share with other people. You may find that as you work your way through the list and cross things off, you also add other activities and goals that you look forward to accomplishing in the future. You also may find that the level of difficulty or challenge of your bucket list activities is changing as your abilities improve or you accomplish more things.
You can also make up a bucket list of major things you want to accomplish in your life. This list can include things that you have only imagined you might accomplish or are life-achieving goals. Examples include things like walking your daughter down the aisle at her wedding, see Paris in the spring, or write a novel or perform at a comedy club.
Writing down a bucket list gives you an actual list of things to accomplish, whether they are large things or small things. Even in the face of illness and physical challenges, there are things you can accomplish. As you mark things off your list, your sense of self-fulfillment and achievement will most likely improve your self-confidence and improve your mood; all good things in life, overall.
Make Your Own Bucket List
Regardless of what challenges you face, you can create your own bucket list of things you want to accomplish in your life. A bucket list does not need to be some elaborate list of things that are impossible to ever accomplish. It can be made up of both large and small things that you want to see happen in your life.
Start with small things. Make up a list of small everyday things that you want to accomplish. If one of your challenges is conquering simple daily activities, then include those things on your first small list. For example, you can make it a goal to walk around the block without stopping or maybe you want to be able to go grocery shopping without assistance. Include activities that you really want to be able to do, they may be a little challenging but you can realistically accomplish. This way, when you cross them off your list, you will feel a sense of satisfaction and achievement when you accomplish those goals.
Make a list of medium things that you want to accomplish. This bucket list could include things that you might not want to do every day or even with regularity, but are milestone activities. For example, maybe you want to go see a local tourist attraction that you have never been to, even though it is local to you. Include some activities that you can accomplish entirely independently on your own and some things that you can share with other people. You may find that as you work your way through the list and cross things off, you also add other activities and goals that you look forward to accomplishing in the future. You also may find that the level of difficulty or challenge of your bucket list activities is changing as your abilities improve or you accomplish more things.
You can also make up a bucket list of major things you want to accomplish in your life. This list can include things that you have only imagined you might accomplish or are life-achieving goals. Examples include things like walking your daughter down the aisle at her wedding, see Paris in the spring, or write a novel or perform at a comedy club.
Writing down a bucket list gives you an actual list of things to accomplish, whether they are large things or small things. Even in the face of illness and physical challenges, there are things you can accomplish. As you mark things off your list, your sense of self-fulfillment and achievement will most likely improve your self-confidence and improve your mood; all good things in life, overall.
Wednesday, 7 March 2012
Publishing Woes
My armchair reflections on ebook publishing!
There is much debate on the publishing of an authors work,
publishing house verses self-publishing. Those from the traditional publishing
world do not like the idea of authors self-publishing and those on the other
side don’t like the nearly impossible task of getting traditional publishers
attention. We have read the stories of authors who could plaster an entire wall
with rejection letters. Is there some right of passage from the traditional
publishing side that if you can survive the rejection process long enough and
eventually get noticed, then you have proven yourself? I don’t count those
authors who ooze natural talent that they strike it off right away. If you are
exceptional, then you will shine.
I get it that the traditional side needs to protect its
business interests and only select those who they feel can generate a profit.
Then money is the only driving factor behind selections. If that is the case,
then the publishing houses should have no issue with those self-publishing.
Technology has given writers options to choose from. The
complaint I often hear is the self-published work is not of the same calibre as
what a publishing house can produce. That is a valid point and I believe
self-published authors can do more to ensure their work is the best it can be.
I also believe that it should not be the only deciding factor against authors
who self-publishing. The problem as I see it for the new author, is the sending
a manuscript to a publisher has the same chance of making it through the
process as purchasing the winning lottery ticket.
Now being able to self-publish in itself doesn’t guarantee
success. I just think that at least you can reach the next level and have a
better chance. It is easy to get a publishing deal with a traditional
publishing house if you have already sold a million copies on your own. My
final thought, I believe both can survive and should.
Sunday, 4 March 2012
The Writing Distraction Symposium
With a show of hands, how many of you writers get distracted
while writing? Okay, you out there that don’t live in a mansion or have a west
wing, or a study, and don’t go into seclusion, again with a show of hands, how
many get distracted? A lot more hands up this time. Perhaps we should list the
types of distractions.
1)
Phone calls.
2)
Kids (fighting, screaming, hungry, wanting something, just
have to say something, upset, unhappy, fixing their bike, a changing of a
diaper, complaining about their brother or sister, etc.)
3)
A knock on the door or the doorbell.
4)
An appointment.
5)
Flood.
6)
Hunger.
7)
The bathroom.
8)
Computer popup messages.
9)
Meteor.
10)
Household chores.
11)
Loss of power.
12)
Spouse.
13)
Fire alarm.
14)
Sleepy.
15)
Thirsty.
16)
Black hole.
17)
Earthquake.
I understand that some of these distractions will occur
rarely while others, more often. The point is what do you do. It is obvious
that you have to deal with them in one way or the other. How you deal with them
can be crucial in how quickly you get back to writing. For example, if children
are fighting, and you need to get involved to settle the dispute, can you
return to your writing? Can you pick up where you have left off? Depending upon
how bad the dispute was, the answer could be yes or no. It can take a few
moments to re-collect your thoughts on what you were writing. I know a couple
of times that when I was distracted, I lost the train of thought completely.
It can be challenging to carve out time to write. First,
examine your routine and put aside those quiet times where distractions are
minimized. As you begin to write on a regular basis, you will discover the
times when your creativity is at its best. It could be early in the morning,
mid-morning, afternoon, late afternoon, evening, or late evening. You will also
find that the optimum times may not always be your best. Those optimum times
will reveal themselves to you as to continue to experiment with writing at
different times of the day. For example, when I worked in the corporate world,
I performed my best starting early in the morning until mid-afternoon. I
figured with writing it would be the same. Not so. I could work, problem
solving, reading, etc, but the creativity portion was not there in strength. To
my surprise, later in the evening, words flowed easier.
Of course, you will get those times, when the words flow
like water. Take advantage of those times.
Keep smiling.
Friday, 2 March 2012
Overcoming Writer’s Stuck
Has anyone heard of writers block? Yes, almost
everyone. Okay, how about writers stuck? Not so many hands up
this time. Writers block can be quite serious for those authors that are so
blocked, they can’t get beyond it. And some never get over it, which I
find is sad. This article will not tackle the more severe case of writers
block, but the less severe situation where you are stuck on where to take your
story. Here’s what I have found during writing, that when the story is
developing and following a mapped outline, that you reach a point where the
story could go in a several different directions. Some directions so different that it
changes the whole story. The other side of that coin is that nothing comes to
mind that makes sense. I would be curious how other writers handle this
situation or am I the only one? You get to a place in the story and you feel
that more of the story should be developed but no convenient way comes to mind.
The analogy is that of a bridge that takes one from one scene into another
while introducing those elements that complete the bridge. I call it bridging the gap.
You don’t want the story to just fall off a cliff and die.
What does one do then?
1. Think about it.
2. Keep writing and fix it later.
3. Cry.
4. Give yourself a break.
5. Have a lovely cup of tea.
6. Brainstorm ideas and write them down.
7. Call your mom.
8. Go for a long walk.
9. Re-read a few sections prior to
the stuck point.
10. Sleep on it.
Some of these suggestions will be useful, while others, not
so. The point of becoming unstuck is to realize that you are in fact you are
not stuck. The thought or idea that completes the connection will come to mind.
Keep smiling.
Thursday, 1 March 2012
Help? Does Anyone Know What People Are Reading?
I can’t be the only one wondering what people are reading
these days. What genres are popular or even the type of story within the genre.
For example, if you pick fantasy, then is it romance fantasy, comical
fantasy, dark fantasy, combat fantasy, or some combination of these.
The New York Times, Fiction Best Sellers list for today has:
PRIVATE GAMES, by James Patterson and Mark Sullivan
Genre - Fiction - Mystery - Suspense - Crime
KILL SHOT, by Vince Flynn
Genre - Fiction - Thriller - Spy - Political
I'VE GOT YOUR
NUMBER, by Sophie
Kinsella
Genre - Fiction - Romance
DEFENDING JACOB, by William Landay
Genre - Fiction - Thriller - Legal - Domestic - Mystery -
Psychological
THE HELP, by Kathryn Stockett
Genre - Fiction - Southern fiction - Historical - Sociological
Does this best sellers list point a direction of the readership
at least for fiction? Probably not! Mystery and suspense appear as the areas of
interest for this period of time, again for fiction. The popularity non-fiction
titles have done well recently. As the population ages and famous people have
their stories told either before or after death, there is an interest in those
stories. That of course really doesn’t help a new writer, himself unless they
are writing about famous or infamous people.
I have chosen the
genres that I like to write and will continue to do so. My sense is that the
readership is looking for a good read and is not necessarily locked into any
particular area. I get the feeling that romance mixed with the genres are
popular too many coupled with a sense of mystery and intrigue. I would like to
know how the blog readers feel about this and their thoughts. Please add your
comments.
Wednesday, 29 February 2012
The Passive Language
This blog blurb is about the use of passive voice in
writing. What is passive voice? Is it really bad? Below are examples of its
usage.
The pen is being held by me. - This is in the passive
voice.
I am holding a pen. - This is the active voice.
Use
of the passive voice is not a
grammatical error. It's a stylistic issue that is
related to clarity. There are times when using the passive voice can prevent a reader from
understanding what you mean.
Now
when I considered the above when editing the first draft of my first novel, I
felt it important that my readers to understand what I was saying in the active
voice where possible. Actually, I wanted my readers to understand the meaning
and clarity of what I was writing for them to enjoy the story. As I continue to
read the passive and active voice, I began to see the subtle differences in the
voice. The next part of this discussion is something I found I was over using.
The
use of to be is considered passive voice that you can’t always avoid.
What I discovered in my writing, to my amazement, is that I used to be
more than I had realized. With that in mind, when I wrote something and fell
into only using to be, I would stop, look at what I was saying,
and change it, when possible, to active voice.
I
think I understand the basic concepts of the passive vs active voice and I
continue to read about it. I know I still need work, because I’m not ready to
teach it. I talked about it here in this blog in order to bring attention, more
to myself, and to those grasping with this structure.
I
would appreciate comments from anyone on this subject and how they dealt with
it.
Keep
smiling.
The Daily Word Count
What is the daily word count dilemma? What is the
motivation? I have read a fair amount on this topic and I get a mixture of
insights. Therefore, let me clarify my interpretation on this subject. I get
the idea, that as a writer, you need to discipline yourself to write on a
regular basis. Now that might sound like a no-brainer, to write, you actually
need to write. I suspect the writers that are already making a sufficient
income from their works, have discovered how to discipline themselves enough in
order to get projects done. What about the rest of us? I know that after
working all day long, or whatever shift you’re on, that when you get home, you
might not feel like writing. That of course can be a challenge getting your
writing undertaking completed. Now the count range I have read has been from
200 to 1000 words per day. When I first began writing, it took a little while
to reach the 500 words per day. To go beyond that, it took discipline to keep
writing. Let me pause here. At this point in my writing career, I didn’t know
if I could be successful at writing, and more importantly, whether I would like
it as a vocation. My bucket list goal was to complete one novel and to get it
done as soon as I possibly could. I set my novel length at between 80,000 to
100,000 words. With that, I had a formula to calculate the time it would take.
I looked at 250 words per day, which roughly worked out to between 45 and 60
weeks. If I upped it to 500 words, then I was looking at 23 to 29 weeks. Okay,
the next level for me, a thousand words, 11 to 14 weeks. That timing for me at
that point was not bad. But 2000 words per day and 5 to 8 weeks sounded even
better. My personal time limit was two months for first draft. I had the
numbers it would take to accomplish my goal. Now all I had to do is do the
work. Now getting up to 2000 words a day was challenging. Some days fell short
and other days went over the 2000 word tally, after a time. During the word
count pursuit, I found that I could break the 5000 word per day count. It was
during one of those writing days that words flowed like a river. I would like
to say that everyday was like that. No, it was not. What I did discover is the
previously thought barriers were removed. I have once thus far broken the
10,000 words per day barrier. For the two-part Zytainium second book in the
story, I average between 2000 to 6000 words per day, with time off to catch up
on other parts of life. For you writers that have the extra time to complete
your masterpiece, choose a word count rhythm that works for you. Just don’t be
afraid to occasionally break a word count barrier that you haven’t done before.
Tuesday, 28 February 2012
Dedication and Appreciation for the Help
As a writer, I discuss in my blog, some of my thoughts I
have as a writer. I touch upon the thoughts behind the ideas that inspired my
novels. One of the things that I have overlooked is the help and assistance that
my spouse has given me. She has read and edited the novels and one short story
that I have written. I tend to drop words and still miss them when I re-read my
works. She catches those errors and other grammatical errors that I make. She
will point out a section and ask, ‘what are trying to say here.’ I look at the
section and think to myself, what was I thinking. In the novel, Alice, she was
a huge help at making sure the voice was the correct gender all the time. Even
the cover of Alice, was her design which after a few trials, she captured on
film.
Thank you Bren for all that you do.
Monday, 27 February 2012
Ideas Behind Alice
When I wrote my novel Alice, I wanted to do something
different, at least for me. First, I wanted to write a paranormal fantasy.
Secondly, the main character was female and the story prospective was from
Alice. Now I know there are a lot of novels called Alice or have the name in
it. I contemplated changing the name to another, but Alice just seemed to fit.
It was the right name for me for my character. I thought writing a fantasy in
current times would be easier than science fiction. With science fiction, I had
to account for names and concepts that I really had to think about in order to
describe it properly to the reader. Other simple things like the use of time,
i.e., seconds, minutes, hours, days, etc, would necessarily be the same as
earth. I didn’t want to describe the orbital rotation period of a planet
because it added nothing to the story. So, with a fantasy based on earth in
today’s time, those challenges went away. As I developed the story, it became
apparent that describing things in a paranormal environment had challenges in
itself. The use of powers not normally seen and keeping them consistent was
something that I had to keep in mind. I found while writing the novel, which I
had to go back and change concepts that were not working for where the story
was going. The other challenge was telling the story from a female, which
worked well in the story I was relating, although I had to stop and ensure that
I did not change the gender voice. Now I did enjoy, taking myself outside of
the box, to write this story. Attempting to write from a female prospective is
a challenge onto itself. It forces me to consider points of view that I
normally don’t do. I have in mind, how the story will continue, and look
forward to reviving those characters again to see where there lives go.
Keep going.
Sunday, 26 February 2012
Zytainium - Next
In the science
fiction series, Zytainium, I started with an idea of others making it seem that
controlling a system of planets energy producing mineral was the way to
dominate the galaxy. And it is. The first book went through that struggle to
fend off those who would take by force what was not theirs. In the second book
of the series, I expanded the idea that it was not the energy itself that was
the source of trouble, but what that energies true potential was. With that
came the suggestion of a even more advanced civilization that did not want any
new members to the advanced species club. My stories main character Tarin,
realized that if his people didn’t begin to understand their destiny, that they
were doomed. When I began writing the second book of the series, I realized
that there was much to be told for it to make sense. So much that I really
couldn’t break up the story. The second book would be the length of two novels.
I consider a good read in the 100,000 words category. I have decided that the second
book will have two parts. I’m currently two-thirds of the way through the
second part of the second book and the story can still go in many different directions.
I will keep writing and see where the story logically takes me.
Sunday, 12 February 2012
New Version of On (my) Writing
As a new writer, I read blogs, news articles, and commentaries from other writers. I read tip and techniques compiled, from sources whenever I come across them. I knew I'm still learning and have a long way to go. Thus far, I have written over 300,000 words. I figure after 500,000 words, a half million, a milestone for me, that I should have learned something. And I have, even up to this point, learned something I mean. That something is recognizing weaknesses or nuances in writing. For example, I suspected and it was confirmed in my first novel that I overused the word, "but." I somehow would set up my sentence structure that to complete it, required the use of "but". I overused it to join two thoughts together. I had to rethink how I was going to write down those thoughts and how to better write them without overusing a word. As I continued to write, I noticed that I would overuse other words, such as, "to be," which is considered passive voice. I researched the passive voice and continue to study it with the goal in mind of improving my writing. Writing in a particular fashion, at least for me, is not an easy thing to change. The changing of my writing structure is not a simple thing. It felt uncomfortable. Despite that, I experimented with how to record a thought that would make sense to the reader. I heard a saying, 'when the student is ready, the teacher will appear'. To me, with writing in mind, I have found that if I overuse a word, and I realize it, I search for examples of that, to find what others have done, or examples of how to overcome the situation. At that point, I felt I was ready to change it up. I do admit, I have a stubborn streak that takes awhile before I'm willing to do something about it. In my next blog, I will talk about my dilemma of dividing a story into two parts because of its length.
Keep smiling.
Keep smiling.
Thursday, 26 January 2012
It's About Time - They Say
Hey all! It seems that it was a while since I posted here. And you would be right.
I'm still writing, plus doing the life thing, plus trying to figure things out. I should have posted something on New Year's about what I was going to be doing, but did not. I think the lead up to Christmas and all that goes with that has a let down, making January difficult. And now January is almost over. Boy, where did the time go? Anyway, back to writing, I continue on. I'm two-thirds my first draft of the second book of the Zytainium series. As I was writing it, and wondering where the story should go, it occurred to me that, I could end the story, or tie it off with a just book 2. If I take it in the direction I intended, then a third part of the series would be required. I went with the latter. The story felt right as it went along to naturally (to me anyway) go in that direction. Each part of the story is at least 100,000 words. Now the story could go further, but for now, that is the direction. At the same time, I have decided to write a short story about my partner's first new truck purchase. To me, it's a great story that needs telling. While that project is started, I started another full-length novel. Why you ask? Well I was feeling in a down mood and was having difficulty in writing my two other works. So I thought, why not write a dark fantasy genre book. And a third project was born. It’s something I wanted to do, so I started it. I'm not sure what the rules are when writing multiple works are and I'm also sure there are lots of opinions on the subject. I started writing one novel at a time and now, at least for the time being, am going to try this experiment. I'll see where it goes. I know my personality needs to take a break from the characters of a story and resurrect characters from another entirely different story. Or something comes to me about where a story needs to go that I was thinking about and now’s the time. Or perhaps, I'm just a bit crazy!
What ever floats your boat, I suppose. In the meantime, I'm thinking of starting a fourth project, another story idea that I have had for a few months. If I begin the story, I know it will get finished. Why, simply because the story has begun and has taken on a life of its own. That is all for now sport fans.
I'm still writing, plus doing the life thing, plus trying to figure things out. I should have posted something on New Year's about what I was going to be doing, but did not. I think the lead up to Christmas and all that goes with that has a let down, making January difficult. And now January is almost over. Boy, where did the time go? Anyway, back to writing, I continue on. I'm two-thirds my first draft of the second book of the Zytainium series. As I was writing it, and wondering where the story should go, it occurred to me that, I could end the story, or tie it off with a just book 2. If I take it in the direction I intended, then a third part of the series would be required. I went with the latter. The story felt right as it went along to naturally (to me anyway) go in that direction. Each part of the story is at least 100,000 words. Now the story could go further, but for now, that is the direction. At the same time, I have decided to write a short story about my partner's first new truck purchase. To me, it's a great story that needs telling. While that project is started, I started another full-length novel. Why you ask? Well I was feeling in a down mood and was having difficulty in writing my two other works. So I thought, why not write a dark fantasy genre book. And a third project was born. It’s something I wanted to do, so I started it. I'm not sure what the rules are when writing multiple works are and I'm also sure there are lots of opinions on the subject. I started writing one novel at a time and now, at least for the time being, am going to try this experiment. I'll see where it goes. I know my personality needs to take a break from the characters of a story and resurrect characters from another entirely different story. Or something comes to me about where a story needs to go that I was thinking about and now’s the time. Or perhaps, I'm just a bit crazy!
What ever floats your boat, I suppose. In the meantime, I'm thinking of starting a fourth project, another story idea that I have had for a few months. If I begin the story, I know it will get finished. Why, simply because the story has begun and has taken on a life of its own. That is all for now sport fans.
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